A thought [oneshot]

chris_shadowkat · Trimis: 01/01/2008 19:27 Titlul subiectului: A thought [oneshot]

Ok, in primul si întâiul rand, n-am crezut niciodata ca voi ajunge sa scriu ceva la sectorul creatie/fan fic. Dar am simtit nevoia sa scriu undeva ceva ganduri, sa imi mai eliberez mintea si sufletul.

despre ce e vb: E o poveste, un fel de poveste, scurta, chiar foarte scurta. E scris in engleza, am simtit de cuviinta. Nu e nimic pervers sau ceva de genu', e cum spune titlul, un gand.

A THOUGHT

I need a hug, but not an ordinary one and not from anyone. A hug from someone particularly and that will be not just a hug, no. it will certainly be more than an usual and normal hug... God, I really want that. I must have it. This thought makes me feel really fluffy inside *giggles*... like someones hair in the morning when he wakes up, all messed up, but he knowns one thing: He desperately needs to go to the bathroom! Immediately! Clumsy, as he is, gets into a wall and wounds his little finger... That doesn't count now. No, not at all. The hair is the most important thing now, just the hair. it needs to be not perfect, but P.E.R.F.E.C.T. ! That is the secret to start a good day :-)

O.K. , I am desperate now, I want that bloody hug, but he's to busy with that hair, with his waves *laughs* . How can somebody pay so much attention to every detail when he is straightening his hair? At that current action he doesn't care about anything else, just the hair... that hair. God, i thing I am going to hide one day that... thing, that evil thing. He will go nuts. i am sure of that, but for crying out loud! He is so much sexier with those curls coming down his face. The hair is so fucking soft. It makes me wanna dance when I run my fingers through his hair and I am sure that some persons would sell their soul to the devil, just to do that ones, just to feel it. An extraordinary feeling, I'll say, like chocolate melting or floating into the clouds. Thank God he is next to me to hold my feet on the ground. I never thought you can love a person so much... Just looking into his eyes, his beautiful green eyes... OMG, those green eyes and that look... That look it's just breathtaking... Cannot believe I am still alive, when those eyes are killing me... He is a Green-Eyed German Piece of Candy. And what a piece, the perfect piece actually. There is no other like him. He knows how to drive me crazy and take care of me. I want to be next to him for as long I will live, don't want someone else, don't want to know other things when he is everything. Yes, he is everything for me, the sun in the sky, the water I drink, the air I breath, my only thought, my only good thought that I ever knew... He is all... He... GEORG.

- Fin -

Stiu ca nu e nu stiu ce, dar sper ca va placut, eu una ma simt mai bine dupa ce am scris asta. :-)

rebecca_th · Trimis: 01/01/2008 21:14 Titlul subiectului:

wow... intradevar e scurta dar placuta
sincer ai prins esentzialul. Nu trebuie lungita o idee destul de mult. Redus si la obiect...

mie una mi-a placut cum ai incadrat totul intr-o rama si atunci cand mai simtzi nevoia de scris.. go on :-D

imi place ca nu e cu niste cuvinte extraordinar de sofisticate si la care sa te gandesti teribil de mult..pare a fi un scris simplu si nu facut ca pentru ceilaltzi.. facut mai intai pentru tine...ca o chestie din inima..

mi-a placut mult descrierea ochilor dar cel mai mult asta :-D

:"Yes, he is everything for me, the sun in the sky, the water I drink, the air I breath, my only thought, my only good thought that I ever knew... He is all... He... GEORG. "

chris_shadowkat · Trimis: 02/01/2008 17:22 Titlul subiectului:

Multumesc mult Rebe pentru parere. inseamna mult pentru mine. Stiu ca mai este cale lunga pana sa ajung sa scriu ceva mai complex. puteam sa il mai lungesc, dar dupa aceea ajungeam sa scriu chestii mai perverse si nu am vrut sa scriu din astea chiar de acuma, de la inceput, poate mai incolo, cand mai prind experienta.

annaloveTH · Trimis: 08/01/2008 21:14 Titlul subiectului:

ioi cat mia placut :w00t:

chiar mia placut

la inceput chiar nu stiam la ce sa ma astept..
cant ai zis:Just looking into his eyes, his beautiful green eyes... OMG, those green eyes and that look..." sincer mam gandit la georg dar...nush...mam gandit ca poate e altcineva...
iar la sfarsit "He is all... He... GEORG." :-D